HMD?

[snapcrackleboom]

Please tell me how I'm doing! This is my first occasion with Roy, so I'm excessively open to any and all crit. In the Real World I'm an art major, so I'm quite used to (occasionally harsh) criticism, so please say what's on your mind! Please also tell me how I might improve, what perspective of character to examine, etc., so I might better Roy for your pleasure.

(Comments are screened! Anon enabled, I think!)